Hello Tristan,
Great job identifying “consistency” and “resilience” as key qualities for a triathlete! Your definitions were clear, and your examples-like sticking to a training plan despite weather or mood, and pushing through fatigue during a race-really show you understand what it takes to succeed in triathlon. Keep focusing on giving specific examples from your experience; it makes your writing engaging and relatable. Well done!
Great job identifying “consistency” and “resilience” as key qualities for a triathlete! Your definitions were clear, and your examples-like sticking to a training plan despite weather or mood, and pushing through fatigue during a race-really show you understand what it takes to succeed in triathlon. Keep focusing on giving specific examples from your experience; it makes your writing engaging and relatable. Well done!