Feedback on writing skills:
Sentence Structure:
Your sentences tend to be long and run together. Try to break them into shorter, clearer sentences. For example, the first sentence could be split into two: "In cycling, you need to clean your chain regularly. This helps prolong the life of your equipment, as chains are delicate components."
Grammar:
Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and pronoun usage. For instance, in the last sentence, "clothes" is plural, so you should use "them" instead of "it."
Vocabulary:
While your cycling vocabulary is good, be careful with word choice. For example, "demain" is not an English word; you probably meant "damage" or "harm."
Sentence Structure:
Your sentences tend to be long and run together. Try to break them into shorter, clearer sentences. For example, the first sentence could be split into two: "In cycling, you need to clean your chain regularly. This helps prolong the life of your equipment, as chains are delicate components."
Grammar:
Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and pronoun usage. For instance, in the last sentence, "clothes" is plural, so you should use "them" instead of "it."
Vocabulary:
While your cycling vocabulary is good, be careful with word choice. For example, "demain" is not an English word; you probably meant "damage" or "harm."