1: in cycling you need to clean your chain after every ride if you want to prolong the life of your equipment because a chain is too delicate . The hubs are also delicate so you have to pay attention to the water because water demain the hubs. And you need to wash your clothes to keep it clean.
Feedback on writing skills:
Sentence Structure:
Your sentences tend to be long and run together. Try to break them into shorter, clearer sentences. For example, the first sentence could be split into two: "In cycling, you need to clean your chain regularly. This helps prolong the life of your equipment, as chains are delicate components."
Grammar:
Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and pronoun usage. For instance, in the last sentence, "clothes" is plural, so you should use "them" instead of "it."
Vocabulary:
While your cycling vocabulary is good, be careful with word choice. For example, "demain" is not an English word; you probably meant "damage" or "harm."
Sentence Structure:
Your sentences tend to be long and run together. Try to break them into shorter, clearer sentences. For example, the first sentence could be split into two: "In cycling, you need to clean your chain regularly. This helps prolong the life of your equipment, as chains are delicate components."
Grammar:
Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and pronoun usage. For instance, in the last sentence, "clothes" is plural, so you should use "them" instead of "it."
Vocabulary:
While your cycling vocabulary is good, be careful with word choice. For example, "demain" is not an English word; you probably meant "damage" or "harm."