Here's a feedback on your sentence:
Sentence structure:
This is a run-on sentence that lacks proper punctuation and structure. It should be broken into smaller, clearer sentences. For example:
"In my opinion, shoes are the most important cycling equipment. You should have at least two pairs. Otherwise, they can get damaged too quickly."
Grammar:
Subject-verb agreement: "it damages" should be "they get damaged" or "they wear out" since you're referring to shoes (plural).
Word choice: "to hold" is unclear in this context and should be removed or replaced with a more appropriate phrase.
Clarity:
The phrase "the most important equipment to hold" is confusing. Consider rephrasing to clarify your meaning
Try to write shorter, clearer sentences. Use proper punctuation and capitalization. Also, make sure your subjects and verbs agree.
Sentence structure:
This is a run-on sentence that lacks proper punctuation and structure. It should be broken into smaller, clearer sentences. For example:
"In my opinion, shoes are the most important cycling equipment. You should have at least two pairs. Otherwise, they can get damaged too quickly."
Grammar:
Subject-verb agreement: "it damages" should be "they get damaged" or "they wear out" since you're referring to shoes (plural).
Word choice: "to hold" is unclear in this context and should be removed or replaced with a more appropriate phrase.
Clarity:
The phrase "the most important equipment to hold" is confusing. Consider rephrasing to clarify your meaning
Try to write shorter, clearer sentences. Use proper punctuation and capitalization. Also, make sure your subjects and verbs agree.