1: To prolong the life of sports equipment, it's important to take care of it. It's important to clean shoes and air-dry them. It's also important to pay attention to the temperature at which clothes are washed.
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While your points are valid, they could be more specific and detailed.The sentences are a bit short and choppy.
In order to improve your writing, ensure each sentence has a clear subject, verb, and object.
While your points are valid, they could be more specific and detailed.The sentences are a bit short and choppy.
In order to improve your writing, ensure each sentence has a clear subject, verb, and object.