Vocabulary application task: Sports and Environmental responsibility

Vocabulary application task: Sports and Environmental responsibility

by Domingos Linda -
Number of replies: 1

For me, sports organizations have a real role to play in being more environmentally responsible. One of the biggest environmental impacts of sport comes from the carbon footprint of fan travel and the energy used in stadiums. To do this, teams should use renewable energy, such as solar panels, like teams like NC State or the Philadelphia Eagles have done. Athletes can also raise awareness among fans about climate change and encourage green action. By reducing waste with programs like Zero Waste, teams can really make a difference. By doing so, they would help make the future more sustainable while reducing economic and social disparities in access to clean energy.

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Re: Vocabulary application task: Sports and Environmental responsibility

by Diakese Demba Helene -
Hello Linda
You successfully used important terms like "environmental impacts," "renewable energy," "climate change," and "economic and social disparities" in your writing. Your examples, such as NC State and the Philadelphia Eagles using solar panels, strengthen your argument and make your points more convincing. You also made strong connections between environmental responsibility, waste reduction, sustainability, and social fairness.

To improve, try to be more specific with phrases like "To do this"—for example, you could say "To reduce this carbon footprint" to make your meaning clearer. Also, combining shorter sentences can make your writing more engaging and flow better. Finally, organizing your writing into two clear paragraphs—one about environmental issues and solutions, and the other about social impacts—would improve readability and structure.