Task 5 Lucie Lemoine

Task 5 Lucie Lemoine

by Lemoine Lucie -
Number of replies: 1

What maintenance practices do you believe are essential for prolonging the life of your sports equipement ? 

Regarding to my pointes, when I sweat it is necessary to aerate my pointes, check the seams of the ribbons regularly for safety and also transport in a suitable bag.


In reply to Lemoine Lucie

Re: Task 5 Lucie Lemoine

by Diakese Demba Helene -
Here's feedback on your English writing:
Your sentence contains good information about pointe shoe care, but it has some grammatical and structural issues. Let's break it down:
"Regarding to my pointes" should be "Regarding my pointe shoes" or simply "For my pointe shoes."
"when I sweat it is necessary to aerate my pointes" is a run-on clause. Consider rephrasing to "it's necessary to air out my pointe shoes after sweating."
"check the seams of the ribbons regularly for safety" is correct and well-phrased.
"transport in a suitable bag" should be "transport them in a suitable bag."