Hello Lucie
You did a good job using important words like "carbon literacy," "carbon footprint," and "waste management" in your writing. You clearly understand how sports affect the environment, especially when it comes to travel and pollution. It’s also great that you mentioned real organizations like the Good Planet Foundation and Yann Arthus-Bertrand to support your ideas.
To improve your writing, try to change up how you start your sentences, as many of them begin the same way. You can also combine some sentences to make your writing flow better. There are a few small grammar mistakes, like "sport actors" instead of "sports actors" or "actors in sports." Also, using words like "Furthermore," "Moreover," or "Additionally" will help make your ideas connect more smoothly.
You did a good job using important words like "carbon literacy," "carbon footprint," and "waste management" in your writing. You clearly understand how sports affect the environment, especially when it comes to travel and pollution. It’s also great that you mentioned real organizations like the Good Planet Foundation and Yann Arthus-Bertrand to support your ideas.
To improve your writing, try to change up how you start your sentences, as many of them begin the same way. You can also combine some sentences to make your writing flow better. There are a few small grammar mistakes, like "sport actors" instead of "sports actors" or "actors in sports." Also, using words like "Furthermore," "Moreover," or "Additionally" will help make your ideas connect more smoothly.