Task Lucie

Task Lucie

by Lemoine Lucie -
Number of replies: 1

I believe that sport actors can raise awareness and influence participants and fans to use new practices to avoid climate change like carbon literacy...

Athletes and sports organizations can participate in actions or support foundations in favor of the environment, such as the Good Planet Foundation created by Yann Artus Bertrand which highlights the social responsibility of each company.

The environmental impacts of sport are mainly at the level of carbon footprint and waste management.

In addition, every sports events involves many trips that have a negative impact on the carbon footprint.

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Re: Task Lucie

by Diakese Demba Helene -
Hello Lucie
You did a good job using important words like "carbon literacy," "carbon footprint," and "waste management" in your writing. You clearly understand how sports affect the environment, especially when it comes to travel and pollution. It’s also great that you mentioned real organizations like the Good Planet Foundation and Yann Arthus-Bertrand to support your ideas.
To improve your writing, try to change up how you start your sentences, as many of them begin the same way. You can also combine some sentences to make your writing flow better. There are a few small grammar mistakes, like "sport actors" instead of "sports actors" or "actors in sports." Also, using words like "Furthermore," "Moreover," or "Additionally" will help make your ideas connect more smoothly.